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Snowing

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finally finished this OTL
sad how nobody will see some of the details that killed me
oh well :Y
contract? Critique? .u.


art, character [c] Me, *AmyRose507
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Ok, I shall attempt to critique.
First of all the background looks amazing, I love the night sky, and the way the falling snow looks,
the snow looks pretty much perfect for the ammount of light in the picture.
Her expression is really beautiful, too.

Now the flaws:
1) Her hands, they fit together sort of awkwardlly. It took me a while to find a way the hands could possiblly be positioned like that, and it wasn't very comfy or natural.

2) Her body, I think it should have been a little longer to acommidate her gigantic bossom. I am quite certain Anna has back problems, though. XD

3) It may be the style you're going for but the shape of her head is bothering me. That cheek is much too pointed and out to the side, it would be better to bring it in a little.

I love the way her little jacket string tassles look (Random)
but her knees look a tad knobby.

AAAAAAND, that's all I got. Overall, great picture! 8D